Instructional Writing !

On Monday and Tuesday , our Class  has been  getting Surprised and Exited

1.We were split in different sides of our class room  and or buddy was on  the other side .

2. Mrs Cutler told our teams what we had to do Instructional writing about one team was Aliens ,and the other was Monsters.

3. We had to sit back side to the other team so they could  not see what we were doing it about .

4. We write  about our picture and how to Draw it .

5. When we had finished we swapped  our writing with our buddy .

6. We had to Draw our buddy's picture from reading there Instructional writing.

It was hard drawing what they had said , and hard reading were are what to put in. 

This is two of our drawing from our instructions.

On Tuesday we had to do Instructional writing about how to tie your shoe laces . We had to read our instructions to Lily and she had to do what our Instructions said and we would see if it worked.

My one did not work because It was not clear enough for it to work.

My Awesome Week 8 Review

This is my Interesting Review

 I hear screams of Fears of Falling , Crying because they are close to death .I see crumbling , rumbling and breaking rocks , and never ending dry and dirty paths . I felt scared , horrified and thrilled when I saw our school on top of an dusty peak.I wonder one day if they will help us by in proving the track.

A Moment in time.

I hear unhappy noises , rumbling and sad groans . Sad stumbles . 

I see sad  and terrified eyes , droopy trunk, and bars all around . 

I felt mean putting these animals to an unhappy life.

I wonder if the animal will ever have Joy in there heart . 

My week 6 Review

This is my week 6 Review😆

The possum animation!

                          

We created a animation to Share a message about an environmental issue in NZ/World and give people some ideas on how to help. I Choose to make mine about Possums because They are a big issue in New Zealand because  they are killing of trees!

An Awesome 1080 persuasive piece of writing

We are learning to write persuasive piece of writing about whether we agree or disagree with the use of 1080 poison in the forest of NZ.

1080

I disagree with 1080 because it is a poison that does not just kill  pests , it kills every thing .

1080 kills other animals . It does not just kill pests . We need to stop using 1080! 1080 is a bad poison that can kill any animal.

We should be using traps not 1080 . Traps kill them straight away if it is a good trap. I think you should get a good trap that will kill them in one shoot.

1080 does not kill fast it takes 30 mins  to 2 hours it depends on the dose. It makes the animal suffer for a long time antill  the 1080 kills the animal .

1080 can be good for killing stoats and stuff like that but it does kill our native animals too.

I would like you to use traps not 1080.