What am I proud of?😀

What am I proud of?

I am really proud of my writing skills and how it has been improving over the years. I am proud of my writing because this year I have improved my skills and how it flows. 

Every day at home I have been writing letters or writing a story to different people and  always changing the topic. Each day I feel like I am getting better at planning and drafting it.

I can keep on improving by taking my time and thinking deeply about the topic. I can also improve by helping others witch also helps me with my under standing.

I would like to move onto being able to write books and be an awesome writer. I want my writing to flow and have heaps of describing words.

 

From Max.  

Good comments and bad comments😁

This week we have been learning about good comments and bad comments. Donna made a slide with all the instructions and what a good and bad comments are. After  we finished the slide we were put into buddy's and mine were Josie, Christiaan. We were told to copy a doc that had comments on it. We had to put a thumbs up to the good ones and thumbs down for the not so good ones. Then we had to highlight the parts that made the comment bad our good. After that we had to comment on that comment and write why it was good or bad.

By Max