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Wednesday, June 19, 2019

 I hear screams of Fears of Falling , Crying because they are close to death .I see crumbling , rumbling and breaking rocks , and never ending dry and dirty paths . I felt scared , horrified and thrilled when I saw our school on top of an dusty peak.I wonder one day if they will help us by in proving the track.

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  1. hi max i really liked that you used nouns,adjectives and verbs it was really descriptive. Ma Te Wa, Sam

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