The awesome Narrative😉

All of a sudden , right in front of Jacks eyes , his family completely disappeared.

In 1985 in a cold , windy morning in Whangarei Jack was playing on the tramp with his little baby sister ,  when she completely disappeared. Jack ran in side to find his parents but they were gone too.  All there was left was a coffee and News paper on the couch.The coffee was still steaming hot. Interesting said Jack Ill stay at my friends house. He called them up.

They did not even answer , they all ways answer the said. Jack went to there house but they were not there ether. This is getting spooky Jack said. Inside his house he found green slime. It was glowing, oozing , and sticky.

St rate away he knew who it was Aliens. Every year they kid nap someones family and this year it was Jacks.

In his back yard he had been making a time machine to go back to Alien world. All it needed was a AA battery. He went to the Packnsave    and brought a AA battery with his own money. He  put it in and then it glowed up hard.

He set it to Alien world , when he got there he saw the  King Alien , and the Queen.

Jack said give my family back. No !!! they said. The only way you can get your family back is if you pass this test track.

Pass 50 hungry dinosaurs , cross a bridge below is lava, and finally dodge 100 arrows.

Do you aseptic the test track and if you finish alive you get your family back.

I accept it said Jack.
Lucky he knew karate and in 10 minutes     he had passed all 50 Dinosaurs. Next one said the king.

In karate he had learnt how to balance rely good.

Next ordered the king.

The King did not know that this clothes he was wearing, was armored plates, That was easy said Jack.

The king was shocked that he had passed all the tests.

The king did let Jack take his family home and they lived happily ever after.